THE DANCE - Joshua Vallely Rough Copy Documentary

This is my rough footage of my documentary, personally I believe it went well, however the lighting of the beginning of poor so people couldn't see detail of the couple.

 I feedback I was given was mixed, people said it should be just the archive pictures as the footage that was shown was the couple was too blurry and dark. However, the sound and and archive animations were crisp. Another idea was to perhaps re-shoot the couple with better lighting. Overall, I was proud of myself of making it and hope I'll make a better version than the rough.