Script Evaluation

From the beginning of my script writing, I always had the idea of writing down something personal. I created the first draft and handed it in for my teacher to give me feedback, he then told me to change the layout and proof read it before handing it in, also not to mention to make the setting more clear and detailed.
 After this, I changed the layout of the script by adding camera angles before each action that is happening so it gives a clear view of what is happening on the screen and wrote the scenes more detailed so it gives a better picture to the person who is reading. Once this was done, I knew it looked like a professional script that could be used tp create my documentary.